Excitedly, on this beautiful evening, the woman and her friend went on a journey into the wilderness to do some exploring. They decided to pack close to 10 moons in the back of the van and off they went. While her friend offloaded, she climbed on the ladder and gently held up one of the lit up moon with both hands and suddenly the dark sky shone brightly. (English)
Hello Mehmet! My name is Poppy and I am from Room 25. I love your story because it is creative and I like how you used lots of describing words. If you could collect moons, would you keep them or would you put them back?
ReplyDeleteBlog you later,
Poppy.
Kia Ora, my name is Hazel and I am in Room 24 at Owairaka District School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post about your writing: The Adventure.
I remember when I did something like this you should check out my blog to see it.
CLICK HERE
Have you ever tried using dialog? I have and its pretty hard!
Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog.
Blog you later,
.Hazel.
Hi, Charlotte here,
ReplyDeleteYour writing is very good.
Seems you have done it in Turkish also.
Coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!
You could make your writing longer but your choice.
Here is my blog HERE
Bye!