Exhausted, The Hunters strided around the Enormous Skeleton that was resting peacefully on a foggy morning, The hunters shivered when getting closer and decided
they could dress themselves before they went near the skeleton. The skeleton bones were huge and it took a long time for the hunters to look through it.
Hi Mehmet. Thank you for sharing your work with us on your blog! Your structure is very powerful in this story. The way you added long, and interesting words to describe what is happening, is wonderful! My question for you is: Did the hunters find out what the animal was before?
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Alofa
Kia ora Mehmet my name is Jarvis from room 8 and I really like your blog post about the big skeleton bones. I remember when I did the same thing. Maybe next time you could try putting an ed or ing word after every at the start of every sentence.
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