The escalator
Shockingly, It was late dark in a lost forest. She strides off the escalator, Her hands and palms were complete with ropes and were crammed, she dashed home wanting to try out her fashionable clothes, the door was squeaking as if it was going to break down but she just went straight on to the mirror and looked at herself she looked fabulous and slept through the night and in the morning she wore her close and went in public but she never got complimented she realised that there was a sign and these clothes and made for comfort and not style so she just wore it and was devastated of how long she had to wait in a line but said at least it was comfortable.
Hi Zion-li here from Room 6.
ReplyDeleteI think that your writing is descriptive and fun to read and well said. I think you should do more work like this and writing. What other kind of work do you have???
Blog ya later!!!!!!
Hi Susana here from room 8
ReplyDeletei think that your writing is good from the start because i like the way that u have started with LY words. i think u should do more like this. What writing has ly words??????
Blog ya later